Mistakes
That ending was so interesting. I love the perspective switch and the questions, as well as the knowledge, that it leaves you with.
Thank you! I was hoping it added, rather than feeling gimmicky
Not at all! A wonderful addition.
I’m legitimately impressed that you have both these stories in your head at the same time lol
I love the world building, especially with the wood that keeps growing!! So cool!
“Admittedly, he looked excellent in the mirror” go off wick, we love a confident king 🙌😂
Really enjoyed this. Ready for chapter 2!
Thank you!! We will have to see how easy it stays to do that as I keep going 🤣
I love the descriptors in this. Very amusing while still building the world and characters.
Thank you! I’ve been having fun conveying characterization through humor, I’m glad it landed
I enjoyed this! Very engaging.
Thank you!
That ending was so interesting. I love the perspective switch and the questions, as well as the knowledge, that it leaves you with.
Thank you! I was hoping it added, rather than feeling gimmicky
Not at all! A wonderful addition.
I’m legitimately impressed that you have both these stories in your head at the same time lol
I love the world building, especially with the wood that keeps growing!! So cool!
“Admittedly, he looked excellent in the mirror” go off wick, we love a confident king 🙌😂
Really enjoyed this. Ready for chapter 2!
Thank you!! We will have to see how easy it stays to do that as I keep going 🤣
I love the descriptors in this. Very amusing while still building the world and characters.
Thank you! I’ve been having fun conveying characterization through humor, I’m glad it landed
I enjoyed this! Very engaging.
Thank you!