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L.M. Sypher's avatar

Yessss! It came together so well! My favorite thing about your writing is how quickly you get drawn into the scene. You don't do too much exposition, but you've got just enough to let the reader picture it for themselves. Great work!

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Devyn T Moore's avatar

I loved this chapter; she is my second favorite now (obviously the horse is still #1).

When you go for the next draft, are you planning of have both accounts of the same scene or are you going to choose?

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