"Serbus had run like perhaps no other horse could, yet even he began to flag, and she rode a Tirfael, and they could run until the setting of the sun."
... I told you do not hurt this horse. He is my favorite character; I am emotionally invested.
That being said, this is my favorite chapter of yours yet. The magic is finally sort of making sense to me (ish), but I know that you are slowly unfolding it as to not info dump.
To your comment, I still like Thrain. I don't know if it makes me understand him more, but he is badass. I am excited to see what happens with the Priestess.
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it, I had the most fun writing this chapter so far too. With the magic system, my hope is that what we've seen so far makes "enough" sense. Tylen is about to get trained in it, and that is my planned spot to tell the readers how it all works.
"Serbus had run like perhaps no other horse could, yet even he began to flag, and she rode a Tirfael, and they could run until the setting of the sun."
... I told you do not hurt this horse. He is my favorite character; I am emotionally invested.
That being said, this is my favorite chapter of yours yet. The magic is finally sort of making sense to me (ish), but I know that you are slowly unfolding it as to not info dump.
To your comment, I still like Thrain. I don't know if it makes me understand him more, but he is badass. I am excited to see what happens with the Priestess.
Thank you for posting and sharing this story!
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it, I had the most fun writing this chapter so far too. With the magic system, my hope is that what we've seen so far makes "enough" sense. Tylen is about to get trained in it, and that is my planned spot to tell the readers how it all works.
I sort of figured that was going to be how it went. But I do really like how unique it is!
Poor Serbus.