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Happy Nielsen's avatar

“He blinked. The mirage had not faded. The men on horses were very real. And they were very close.” I gasped at this! Really greats start, I’m looking forward to the rest. Poor Hal 🙁

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Birdie Falling's avatar

“The sun set in blood, and Tylen’s world ended with it.” Was a devastating last line. Great job.

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