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Devyn T Moore's avatar

Ope, here we go. Again, the magic system is super cool.

I will say, I love stories that have multiple points of view. However it is so easy to get lost as a reader or blend characters together as a writer. I do think you are doing a good job of keeping characters separate in your writing style. I haven't gotten lost yet, and it is interesting to see how all of their stories will fit together.

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