Ope, here we go. Again, the magic system is super cool.
I will say, I love stories that have multiple points of view. However it is so easy to get lost as a reader or blend characters together as a writer. I do think you are doing a good job of keeping characters separate in your writing style. I haven't gotten lost yet, and it is interesting to see how all of their stories will fit together.
Ope, here we go. Again, the magic system is super cool.
I will say, I love stories that have multiple points of view. However it is so easy to get lost as a reader or blend characters together as a writer. I do think you are doing a good job of keeping characters separate in your writing style. I haven't gotten lost yet, and it is interesting to see how all of their stories will fit together.
Thank you!! It’s definitely something to balance, there’s like 10-15 already haha